For this weeks writing we had to choose a food and write a story about it as if it was loved by every one so this week have chosen this to share with you here is what I came up with.
There once was an ice cream with joy and love to give. He was known for being the happiest one in town and all the children loved him, but one day came upon him a frown. It was such a hot day that everyone wanted an ice cream like him Mr ice cream of course to cool them off, but so many people bought them that he was the only one left in the shop. All of a sudden came upon him a shadow a very big one and then a child's hand reached out to grab Mr ice cream “oh no” he screamed he quickly jumped out of the freezer but it was so hot that instead of jumping he started bumping into things. He said to himself, “this can not happen, I will not be eaten, today my journey starts to find a place where no one loves me and where no one want to claim me as there's”. So there he set off to find a new home. He started to walk until someone started to talk and then they grabbed a fork it was obvious to him that they were hungry and if he was seen he would be eaten in one bite so he started to run and hide by now it was time that he had started to melt and there was a cozy house close by so when no one was looking, he decided to sneak in through the window of the house and then he set up his plan to get to the fridge and then he saw a bridge he had an idea if used his sticky hands to climb into the fridge he wouldn't melt click click click went his sticky hands along the fridge there he was inside his new home “oh no” he said the owner of the house called Lucy opened the fridge but instead of eating him Lucy cared for and kept him alive. So there Mr Ice cream was living a great life in his new home with Lucy his best friend.
If you chose a food to write about which one would you chose ?
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Wednesday, November 27, 2019
Monday, November 25, 2019
Animal airline's
This year for silent writing we had to go to Pobble 365 and find an image to wright about. I chose a photo with a lady holding a baby on a plane with animals surrounding her. Today I am going to share with you a few paragraphs of what I came up with. Be sure to check out Pobble 365
Animal airlines
Goo goo ga ga here comes Indie into the office and oh no she’s found the computer left open she threw her hands on the keyboard click click click she had deleted the tickets. She clicked one with an elephant on it because its her favorite animal. Indie heard Evelyn's footsteps and went to hide but she couldn't find anywhere to hide and accidentally sat on the printer underneath the desk beep beep beep went the printer she sat on small sign that says print. Evelyn came and sat on the office chair squeak last week Evelyn didn't share her cupcake with Indie so Indie wanted to get her back so she decided to put a whoopie cushion on Evelyn's seat to distract her from her being under the desk. Evelyn went to look under the desk for the printer “Oh look mum must of printed out the tickets for me” said Evelyn without noticing Indie under the desk. As Evelyn left the room Indie followed her into the car ready to go to the airport when she was putting her suitcase in the boot of the car the tickets fell out of her hand and Indie caught them in her hands.
what would you wright about if yo chose the same image as me ?
Animal airlines
Ticket trouble
Good morning Evelyn said her mum why don’t you go pack for our holiday “What why can’t you pack” said Evelyn. Because your 19 years old you can pack yourself I’m going to go wake up Indie now as their mum went to go wake up Indie she felt like she had forgot something ah Evelyn herd a scream and ran upstairs “I forgot to book the tickets please go to book the plane tickets” said mum “what I thought you said that you already did” said Evelyn while she was booking the tickets she heard this come here this instant young lady what why didn't you pack your suitcase go pack OK said Evelyn “I said now” yelled her mum.
A big mistake
what would you wright about if yo chose the same image as me ?
Thursday, November 21, 2019
The summary of my European summer holiday
A few days before we due to leave for our holiday I went and got my suitcase so I could start packing, obliviously packing winter clothes when I was going a summer climate would be pointless so I had to reach to the very back of my wardrobe to find my summer clothes because I new that it would be hot very hot and when and I mean hot because there its a minimum of 30 degrees plus. On the day we had to leave my dad took us to the airport and although I was going to miss my dad I was looking forward to seeing my family in Malta.
My Nanna (grandma) and Nannu (grandpa) were so excited they even called us while we were at Christchurch airport checking in our bags ready to leave. Unfortunately I had to leave my dad for four week as he cant come with us straight away because he had to some work before he could come. We boarded our first plane and our European summer began, our first 10 hour flight was to Singapore, second flight was to Frankfurt and finally our last flight was to Malta where my Nanna, Nannu, auntie Fleur and my cousin Kai were waiting at the airport. It was great to have finally arrived after such a long journey, immediately we felt the heat as it was mid thirties.
if you were to go on a two month trip where would you go ?
if you were to go on a two month trip where would you go ?
PBL letter
Dear Elizabeth
I am very sorry to say farewell. I am going to ride a waka right across the ocean to try find a new
start to life I don't know what I will find there and if I will survive thats why I am sending this lette
r to you. I am bringing with me five fish, ten fruit and thirteen bali loaves and I also have a hole trunk
off clothes pieces of paper and a pen to write letters plus some things for survival I don't know how long
I am going to be on this boat for but people have said that it could take up to two months roughly so far I
have seen so many things such as wildlife and I can hear a faint sound of birds tweeting further ahead of
me I had some water but I drank it all so now I have no choice but to to drink salt water it is nothing like
home but its beautiful what more could I ask for anyway the trip was horrible I could not even sleep because
of the loud sound off water crashing against the waka it sounded like someone was banging a hammer
against the waka and when I looked ahead of me all I could see was fog but it was worth it because we
found what we were looking for and we just arrived on a beautiful piece of land, we decided to call it
Aotearoa, the land just looks like dirt dirt dirt with some hills and a few puddles of mud it is a rough
start but I can definitely see a better future living here I just had to carry my trunk all the way up
over a hill and my skirt got ripped from all the rocks we made some huts and were trying to find
a way to make a stove so we can cook some food on it
start to life I don't know what I will find there and if I will survive thats why I am sending this lette
r to you. I am bringing with me five fish, ten fruit and thirteen bali loaves and I also have a hole trunk
off clothes pieces of paper and a pen to write letters plus some things for survival I don't know how long
I am going to be on this boat for but people have said that it could take up to two months roughly so far I
have seen so many things such as wildlife and I can hear a faint sound of birds tweeting further ahead of
me I had some water but I drank it all so now I have no choice but to to drink salt water it is nothing like
home but its beautiful what more could I ask for anyway the trip was horrible I could not even sleep because
of the loud sound off water crashing against the waka it sounded like someone was banging a hammer
against the waka and when I looked ahead of me all I could see was fog but it was worth it because we
found what we were looking for and we just arrived on a beautiful piece of land, we decided to call it
Aotearoa, the land just looks like dirt dirt dirt with some hills and a few puddles of mud it is a rough
start but I can definitely see a better future living here I just had to carry my trunk all the way up
over a hill and my skirt got ripped from all the rocks we made some huts and were trying to find
a way to make a stove so we can cook some food on it
Sincerely from you best friend Mimi
if you were to ride a waka what would you bring with you ?
Thursday sport
Thursday sport!
Every Thursday this term we do sport. Korfball first we got split into four groups then we waited till our group was called to go downstairs. we were taught by a man who was from the Netherlands, first he split us into two teams and we then started to play. Korfball is like both netball and basketball and you are not allowed to step or to dribble with the ball the are defenders and attackers to. It is so much fun and I glad I got the opportunity to learn it. Lawn bowls , first everyone got ether a green or purple ball. The people with green balls are in a team and the people with purple balls are in a team you are in a circle and you have to roll your balls in to the middle to get into the hula hoops in the middle I really enjoyed learning something new and I would gladly do it again I still have to do cricket and I am looking forward to it.
If you were to choose which one of these sports which one would you choose ?
Every Thursday this term we do sport. Korfball first we got split into four groups then we waited till our group was called to go downstairs. we were taught by a man who was from the Netherlands, first he split us into two teams and we then started to play. Korfball is like both netball and basketball and you are not allowed to step or to dribble with the ball the are defenders and attackers to. It is so much fun and I glad I got the opportunity to learn it. Lawn bowls , first everyone got ether a green or purple ball. The people with green balls are in a team and the people with purple balls are in a team you are in a circle and you have to roll your balls in to the middle to get into the hula hoops in the middle I really enjoyed learning something new and I would gladly do it again I still have to do cricket and I am looking forward to it.
If you were to choose which one of these sports which one would you choose ?
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