WHY WELLINGTON . . .

Hi guys welcome back, this week in Kaupeka (year 7/8) for writing we had to make up a question about NZ and its history. Mine was WHY DID THE CAPITAL CITY NEED TO CHANGE AND WHY WELLINGTON ? then we had to write 2-3 paragraphs about our questions. We  had an option of display our learning using a doc or a google drawing I chose to use a google drawing. When I first started to write about my question I wasn't to sure what I should write but in the end I figured it out. when we had finished our writing we had a workshop where we could show our learning to the class. Heres my writing enjoy 😋

how did you like my writing? anyways I hope you liked my writing and maybe you could write something like this yourself have a nice day, and thanks for reading my blogger, BYE 😄

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As I touched the mirror. . .

Level 3: use a range of  written features to engage the audience.

This week for our writing we had to do narrative writing, we had four pictures to choose from as our inspiration I was inspired by a picture on Pobble 365 called ¨the mirror in the attic¨. here is my work for this week writing task I hope you like it.😜 

   The mystical mirror in the attic

 On a warm summer evening, Emma and Maddie had just bought their new house so they were cleaning the place. Maddie went to clean behind the staircase in the attic where she found an old mirror. The mirror looked old and dusty so she called Emma to help her bring it upstairs. Once they had taken it up stairs Emma went to clean it but she was sucked into it somehow, Maddie was shocked she didn't know where her friend had gone she touched the mirror and she disappeared too. 

Suddenly they appeared to be in a different world. It looked like when Maddie would watch movies that were made in the eighteen forties that's when the girls realized they were in the eighteen forties!. They tried to call their friends but they couldn't because in the eighteen forties they didn't have phones. The girls looked for somewhere to stay and they had to do it fast because there was a big storm coming, They found an old house in the town so they decided to stay there till they could leave.

 The next day when the storm was over they decided to have a look at the town, as they walked past the old fashioned shops they got an idea they searched for a mirror shop, finally they found one they rushed inside to try to find the same mirror that was sold to the people they bought their house from. There it was the same old mirror with the chipped gold edging. They snatched the mirror off the shelf, and they carefully touched it at the same time, there was a shattering noise because the mirror had shattered as the girls got taken back to their hometown.

Thanks for reading my narrative writing for this week 😊

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whats a good email?

LI - identify key words which when combined with prior knowledge, will help with understanding  & LI -  Make connections between texts (Group L).

This week for reading we had to create a digital poster or slideshow and include all the things that are needed for appropriate email etiquette. Once we had created  it, we had to make a screencastify talking about our poster. Here is my learning I hope you like it. 😜  

Thanks for reading my blog have a nice rest of your day. 

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what makes a good blog and comment?

Welcome back everyone!, today I will be teaching you how to write a great blog post and comment step by step. first I will show you how to write a great blog post and then I will show you how to write a amazing comment.

BLOG POST
1. Catchy title EG - an exiting title to hook the reader in  
2. Introduction EG-welcome back today I am going to...
3. Information EG -tell the readers about your topic
4. Conclusion  EG -summarise what you told them about
5. Question at the end EG -What did you do in lock down? 

COMMENT
1. Something Positive EG -I love the way you. . .
2.Something Thoughtful EG -when I read your blog I learnt. . .
3. Something helpful EG -You could try this next time. . .



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