welcome back bloggers, today I will tell you what we have been doing for writing this week. Well for writing we have been writing about this short clip called PARTLY CLOUDY. The teachers gave each of us a part to write about, there were nine parts and I chose to write about part five. We had to use a prepositional phrase, hyphen and a rhetorical question. Here is my writing for this week.😋
High in the stratosphere Peck had just returned for another ghastly delivery, he showed Gus where most of the feathers had fallen off his wing. Gus quickly formed another sculpture, and he then showed it to peck.
Peck took a step back just as a small goat sprinted towards him and waked him in the stomach, Gus quickly set the goat down into a big blinding-white bag. Gus and Peck both gazed at one of the other cloud-creators having a great time with an adorable baby.
Gus took a quick glance at what he had created in despair. Just before handing the package to Peck. Peck knew he was going to be beaten up with this cargo package. How was Peck going to manage anymore of these deadly deliveries?
Here is the short clip PARTLY CLOUDY! if you would like to have a look at it. partly cloudy
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